I just put together my Killing Hitler with Praise and Fire Choose Your Own Adventure book V1, it's not too bad. Would love some feedback on it, I used inklewriter, since it seemed like the easiest way to link everything. Attached is also the latest book cover sketch.
If you can think of any other ways to stop Hitler that I might have missed let me know and I can credit you when my book is released in book form, android and ios in November.
Killing Hitler With Praise And Fire A Time Travel Paradox
Jett79
Hey! So, I read through the whole thing -- all the options, all the endings. I enjoyed it! You have a few spelling mistakes in there, though, and I think I saw a grammar misstep, too. Just something to double check before you finalize it.
I actually do have another option you can add to the book. Hitler's brother died when he was young and it affected him tremendously. According to his family, he was a bright, fun, happy child who was extremely outgoing and well, all the stuff you'd expect from a normal kid. But after his younger brother died from some illness (don't remember at the moment), he became withdrawn, angry, and much quieter. His family said he completely changed and that the fun, happy kid they knew was gone. He was actually going to a Hindu elementary school at the time and had wanted to be a priest when he grew up, that is, until his brother died. I had always thought that if his brother had survived or maybe even never got sick in the first place, Hitler would have just grown up, joined the church, and no one would have ever even known he existed.
I saw all this about his brother and his early life on some history program, but I'm sure you can look it up for yourself and write it appropriately... Hope this all helps! :)
ulfusNG
Wow, that's fantastic Jett, I didn't know about his brother, thank you for that, I'll have to read up on it and add it to the story.
I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to go through all the choices, though I know I need to add a lot more. It's currently around 13,000 words though I expect it to get to around 30-40k.
Would you like your credit as Jett79 or your real name? If real name please pm it to me.